Monday, 14 March 2011

HERE WE GO:THE FIRST


Presidential Death

There was a detective in London named JackyChan. One day in North America the President was found dead in the white house. The people of America called JackyChan because he was such a nice detective and was popular. He came from London to the white house. The first thing he found was the Presidents limo was not there and the two guards on the gate were fallen on the ground since that night. He went inside the Presidents room and noticed that one window was broken and one chit tied with a small stone was lying on the ground.
The president had a bullet in his chest and his body was lying on the bed. The detective opened the chit which was lying on the ground, in it was written addresses of two halls Lincoln Hall & the Great Hall and the time 9.15 AM also. At the end in the chit was written “Hi Detective JackyChan.”
The detective was confused in which hall to go? The men who had murdered the president were going to meet in only one hall. The detective decided to send a crew of policemen in the Great Hall and going to the Lincoln Hall by himself. Next morning the crew of policemen was in the Great Hall hiding before 9.15 AM. The detective was also hiding separately in Lincoln Hall. Luckily the two men were meeting in the same Lincoln Hall. One of the men had some kind of papers in his hand and he was showing the papers to another man one by one. The detective tried to catch those men and tried to shoot the man who had the papers on the leg.
But by mistake he made a head shot, the other man immediately got hold of the papers and ran from the other door in the hall. To the detective’s surprise he was running away in the presidents’ limo. He threw out a half burnt paper. The detective hurried immediately and saw a name and a photo burnt on the paper. But he was able to make out that it was a death certificate.
Next morning in the newspaper it was written “one patient died because of wrong medicine”. The doctor who was treating the patient was taken to the court. The detective was interested in the case hence he sat in the court room to hear the decision if it could help him solve his own case.
The doctor’s face was ditto of the president. The detective thought about it that what could be the solution to this problem. He got the solution of both the problems and it was one man of those two was the president. 
They both had killed the real doctor and the president was staying as the doctor. And because the president didn’t know anything about medicines the patient had died. He told this all to the Judge of the court and the president was sent to the jail. The detective went back to London after solving both the cases.
Anhad Dixit
Vardaan Nath
                                          Aron & Allon Philip
                                      Eeshan Surnis
 Dhruv Aher

The Bishop’s School, Camp, Pune (Mah) India / Std II “C”

2 comments:

  1. fortunately enough, i am one of the lucky few to have read the story in good old paper and ink, and it is, with all its pluses and minuses, a very neatly done detective story. keep them coming guys, i'm already a JackyChan fan!

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  2. The content is very good but has been formalised in haste.,you can do much better. Keep it up.----Umesh Dixit

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